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		<title>By: Radio Show &#124; Shon Bacon: Editing and The Creative Process &#124; Anjuelle Floyd</title>
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		<dc:creator>Radio Show &#124; Shon Bacon: Editing and The Creative Process &#124; Anjuelle Floyd</dc:creator>
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		<description>[...] Developing Your Writing Style [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Stanice Anderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stanice Anderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Nov 2008 16:25:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Very helpful.  Thanks</description>
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		<title>By: How to Improve Writing Style &#124; English Writing Software</title>
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		<dc:creator>How to Improve Writing Style &#124; English Writing Software</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Oct 2008 11:39:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Darnetta</title>
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		<dc:creator>Darnetta</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Oct 2008 04:55:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Valuable info!  You know I&#039;m still working on my voice so it&#039;s much appreciated.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Darnetta&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://poeticgenesis.blogspot.com/2008/09/write-way-2-editors.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The Write Way #2 Editors&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Valuable info!  You know I&#8217;m still working on my voice so it&#8217;s much appreciated.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Darnetta&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://poeticgenesis.blogspot.com/2008/09/write-way-2-editors.html" rel="nofollow">The Write Way #2 Editors</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: APOOO</title>
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		<dc:creator>APOOO</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 18:51:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Looking...lol.</description>
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		<title>By: APOOO</title>
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		<dc:creator>APOOO</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 15:23:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;blockquote&gt;There someone asked me do I write in proper past tense. I will admit I had no clue what she was talking about. Until she showed me I use the word “had” in front of a lot verbs.&lt;/blockquote&gt;

QQ...</description>
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<p>QQ&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Jennifer C.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennifer C.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 14:12:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My list of words that I shouldn&#039;t use or rarely use is always getting longer. I confess I use to use a lot of the word &quot;that&quot; and &quot;just.&quot; However, since someone pointed it out to me I have become more aware of my choice of words. 

This pass weekend at a writers&#039; group meeting, where I was a guest, and while there I learned some valuable information. There someone asked me do I write in proper past tense. I will admit I had no clue what she was talking about. Until she showed me I use the word &quot;had&quot; in front of a lot verbs. I forget what she told me about the word &quot;was&quot; but I over use it as well.

Your examples here has also showed me that I am still doing somethings I need not do.

Reading I read just about everything. I am not big on certain genres but I don&#039;t only read in the genre I like most. Now my favorite genres are romance and chick-lit and I don&#039;t write either. 

See ya next month.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Jennifer C.&#180;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://bizarrejcmartin.blogspot.com/2008/09/monday-musing.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Monday Musing&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My list of words that I shouldn&#8217;t use or rarely use is always getting longer. I confess I use to use a lot of the word &#8220;that&#8221; and &#8220;just.&#8221; However, since someone pointed it out to me I have become more aware of my choice of words. </p>
<p>This pass weekend at a writers&#8217; group meeting, where I was a guest, and while there I learned some valuable information. There someone asked me do I write in proper past tense. I will admit I had no clue what she was talking about. Until she showed me I use the word &#8220;had&#8221; in front of a lot verbs. I forget what she told me about the word &#8220;was&#8221; but I over use it as well.</p>
<p>Your examples here has also showed me that I am still doing somethings I need not do.</p>
<p>Reading I read just about everything. I am not big on certain genres but I don&#8217;t only read in the genre I like most. Now my favorite genres are romance and chick-lit and I don&#8217;t write either. </p>
<p>See ya next month.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Jennifer C.&#180;s last blog post..<a href="http://bizarrejcmartin.blogspot.com/2008/09/monday-musing.html" rel="nofollow">Monday Musing</a></em></abbr></p>
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