Comments on: Showing vs. Telling by Shonell Bacon

By: Victoria Wells

Victoria Wells — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 15:24:44 +0000

Thanks, Shon. This was a really great and useful tool. I’m looking forward to future articles.

By: Monica Marie Jones

Monica Marie Jones — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 03:09:16 +0000

This has helped me tremendously. Thank you so much!

Monica Marie Jones
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By: Linda Chavis

Linda Chavis — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 15:51:53 +0000

GREAT post..

By: Execumama

Execumama — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 14:49:38 +0000

You are so on-the-money with your comment about what we do for fear of losing our readers. I am struggling with that a bit as we speak...! Thank so much for your insight. It is much appreciated! Execumama´s last blog post..Peeking...

By: Shon Bacon

Shon Bacon — Mon, 02 Feb 2009 23:53:41 +0000

Thanks for the comments, ladies,

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By: Dera

Dera — Mon, 02 Feb 2009 19:04:30 +0000

Good advice. Enjoy your blogs.

By: Jennifer C.

Jennifer C. — Mon, 02 Feb 2009 02:03:50 +0000

Great info as always. Taking notes to remind myself of what I should be doing. Jennifer C.´s last blog post..Virginia DeBerry & Donna Grant

By: Rhonda McKnight

Rhonda McKnight — Mon, 02 Feb 2009 00:45:46 +0000

Good post, Shonell. As a free-lance editor lack of showing is one of the common problems I find in people’s work. There definitely has to be a balance between showing and telling, but largely an author should expect to show rather than tell.